Our task was to create a short but effective performance based on the preparation for train surfing, the actual journey and the ending with a cliff hanger. Divided up into groups of 5 or 6 our teacher talked about what the cliff hanger should be based upon. It was about a new recruit to a "gang" of train surfers where he/she has little to no knowledge about train surfing gets stuck on top of the train without his gang who leaves him and the police surrounding area. Wether the police was corrupt or not they would either charge or fine them or sentence them to jail. In our case as the train surfers were poor and generally young or teenagers they didn't care that they were putting their life at risk just for some adrenalin and fun. So what the new recruit or the one who gets caught by the police does is that he sees one of the electricity power lines running along the roof of the train station and reacher up to grab for it. The area around him is in no shock as they are used to this kind of scenarios but the cliff hanger is that we don't know wether he or she actually touches the power cord.
This is the ending for our performance. The way we built up to this scene was by showing from the very beginning that Aryaman was nervous and uncertain of what he should be doing. Once all of us on the train (gang of train surfers) jumped off and Aryaman was left standing Josiah (the police officer) came around pointing his gun at Aryaman. Unclear of how he should defend himself, Aryaman immediately reached for the power cable and very promisingly sad he would touch it only if Josiah wouldn't lower his weapon. With a hesitant look on his face hi took a breath in got higher on his tippy toes but suddenly Josiah dropped his weapon and Aryaman climbed down the train. Josiah warned him and told him off not to do this every again, gave him a little nudge and walked away.
What we could have done to create a better performance could have been to have a louder atmosphere when the gang was surfing and together and really brought down the tone when it was only Aryaman and Josiah left. I don't think we should have continued when Aryaman said his last words where Josiah brought down his weapon to keep the cliff hanging more alive and to mark the moment clearer. And for the picture their facial expressions could have been a lot more prominent and clear. Their stance could have been stronger but I like the way Aryaman is reaching his hand up to the power cable yet still out to the police officer. To create a better atmosphere maybe the rest of the gang could have been around in different places looking shock to see what he would do next.